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The Crown of Oaths and Curses

Author

J Bree

Score

8.5/10

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The Crown of Oaths and Curses

BLURB: Rooke must face fate. 


A witch with no coven except her brother to call her own, the scars from a war which was not hers to fight and a mate she knows will reject her for who she is, her fate seems a pitiful one but one she must accept all the same. For not even Kings can defy their destiny. 


Forced to live amongst those who hate her for what she represents whilst rebuilding the land rich with the blood of her ancestors she fights on, always stoic in the face of fate. 

REVIEW: If 'on tenterhooks' were a book, this would fit the description (fyi who knew it wasn't tender hooks?). Angst, agony and a 2am finish really do add up to a successfully addictive book. Even the first 10-15% made up of world building and introductions nudged just enough mystery and unique characterisation of the female protagonist to keep my interest. Her maturity, devotion to her people, self-awareness, altruism and just pure goodness without feeding into a virginal stereotype were so compelling portrayed with layers of complexity enough for me to root for her subconsciously and even audibly when it comes to her one liner against K (initialised to reduce spoilers). 


The problem with pouring so much likeability and sheer credibility into the heroine is that all other characters pale and even sour in comparison. In particular the male princes verged on the point of flat at times with the commitment to their hatred, though you have to give credit to their unwavering resolve for cynicism though at this point its just prejudice. Despite  intermittent reminders of Soren's sacrifice and generosity for his peoples, his aspirations of royal leadership and capacity for empathy is contrasted by his utter inability to notice a good person when they're stood/chained right in front of him. It's frustratingly good for the tension of the novel but frustratingly unrealistic, as if the character cannot achieve any kind of development because not even truth will shame him out of his prejudice. I wish there were more instances of a softer/layered version him peeking through - or at least one who acknowledged more than just the 'fate-linked' portion of their connection. Is a bit of gratitude too much to ask?


Another pet peeve (purely self-inflicted) is the lack of sequel just yet. But again, my inability to check a lack of sequel or self-restrain the part of me that says 'ah well, I'll start the series anyway', makes for torture everytime a book like this shows its true cards. I honestly loved the world building, I loved the main character's honing of her craft of healing but ability to decimate on the battle field just adding that little bit of fire everyone wants in a strong female lead.

ANALYSIS:


SIDE NOTE (general fantasy point) - At times the author says rather than displays the emotions of the characters. Something I never would have thought to pick up on until a writer/professor pointed out to me the power of just trusting your reader to pick up the cues rather than spelling it out. Guilty of it in my own writing, it seems to be popular in fantasy novels to say 'out of shame' her cheeks reddened, with the former being redundant. Now its something I can't not notice much to my annoyance. 

THEMES: 

Prejudice

Fantasy

War

Power

Romance

Friendship

Loyalty

Courtly machinations

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